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I listened, captivated by her story. “Wow, what happened?”  
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I sat silent, every nerve taut as a wolf’s, watching her across the lantern-lit veranda. “By God,” I blurted, “what happened next?”
  
Octavia paused, the soft rustling of vineyard leaves filling the silence. Her eyes, cold and distant, gazed long  into the shadows beyond the veranda, as though searching through centuries for answers hidden in the dark.
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Octavia drew a slow breath. The vines shivered under a ghostly breeze, as though nature herself held her breath. Her eyes, pale and distant, sought some secret beyond the dark rows.
  
"Fire," she said softly, her voice barely above a whisper, edged with something like regret. "They came by torchlight—men with faces obscured by hunger and hatred, banners waving in the smoke. The peasants, stirred to madness by fear and whispers. Our home, the gardens, the old oak—all set ablaze."
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“Fire,she said, and the single word fell like an axe. “They swept in with torches—ragged peasants driven mad by hunger and rage, their faces twisted in hate. Banners snapped in the smoke like dying sails. They struck our home, the gardens, the ancient oak—all swallowed in hellfire.
  
Her fingers tightened almost imperceptibly on the delicate stem of the wine glass, a rare tension rippling through her otherwise impeccable composure.
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Her fingertips clenched the wine glass so barely that only a hawk might spy the tremor. It was a crack in her armor that few ever glimpse.
  
"My father fought. Brave, foolish man. I watched from behind a column, small and hidden. He shouted orders, but his voice was lost in the roar of flames. And my mother—" Octavia paused, her eyes briefly closing, a controlled, painful breath slipping through parted lips. "She turned to me, calm as always, with eyes full of love and sorrow. 'Run, Octavia,' she told me. 'Hide. And whatever happens, don't look back.'"
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“My father met them head-on—brave, but foolhardy. I huddled behind a marble column, heart pounding like a trapped animal. He bellowed commands that thundered into the inferno and vanished. And my mother…” Octavia’s breath caught, a thin, deliberate gasp. “She came to me, calm as a winter dawn, eyes bright with sorrow and resolve. ‘Run, Octavia,she whispered. ‘Hide. Don't look back.’”
  
The wind stirred gently, carrying the scent of sandalwood and roses from Octavia's hair, blending softly with the night. Her voice lowered further, heavy with the impact of the distant memory.
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A wash of sandalwood and crushed roses drifted from her hair, bitter and sweet. Her voice sank to a hush heavy with memory.
  
"Of course, I did look back. From the edge of the forest, I watched the flames consume everything. I saw my father fall, sword in hand. And I saw them drag my mother away, her gaze locked to mine until shadows and smoke swallowed her whole."
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“Of course, I did look. At the forest’s edge I watched the flames hunt down everything I knew. I saw my father crumple, sword in hand. I saw them seize my mother, drag her into the firelight—her gaze locked on mine until smoke and shadow claimed her.
  
Octavia turned her face back toward me, those glacial eyes catching the faint lantern light. For just a moment, beneath centuries of practiced control, vulnerability flickered. She let the weight of her words linger in the cool summer night. The vineyard remained quiet, the stars overhead unmoved.
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She lifted her face. In the lantern glow, centuries of control slipped, and for a heartbeat she was only flesh and bone, haunted and raw.
  
I blinked. “Did… did they survive? What happened next?”
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The night held its breath again. The vineyard lay still beneath a sky of cold stars.
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I blinked, voice small in the hush: “Did they—did any of them survive? What happened after?”

Latest revision as of 18:17, 18 April 2025

I sat silent, every nerve taut as a wolf’s, watching her across the lantern-lit veranda. “By God,” I blurted, “what happened next?”

Octavia drew a slow breath. The vines shivered under a ghostly breeze, as though nature herself held her breath. Her eyes, pale and distant, sought some secret beyond the dark rows.

“Fire,” she said, and the single word fell like an axe. “They swept in with torches—ragged peasants driven mad by hunger and rage, their faces twisted in hate. Banners snapped in the smoke like dying sails. They struck our home, the gardens, the ancient oak—all swallowed in hellfire.”

Her fingertips clenched the wine glass so barely that only a hawk might spy the tremor. It was a crack in her armor that few ever glimpse.

“My father met them head-on—brave, but foolhardy. I huddled behind a marble column, heart pounding like a trapped animal. He bellowed commands that thundered into the inferno and vanished. And my mother…” Octavia’s breath caught, a thin, deliberate gasp. “She came to me, calm as a winter dawn, eyes bright with sorrow and resolve. ‘Run, Octavia,’ she whispered. ‘Hide. Don't look back.’”

A wash of sandalwood and crushed roses drifted from her hair, bitter and sweet. Her voice sank to a hush heavy with memory.

“Of course, I did look. At the forest’s edge I watched the flames hunt down everything I knew. I saw my father crumple, sword in hand. I saw them seize my mother, drag her into the firelight—her gaze locked on mine until smoke and shadow claimed her.”

She lifted her face. In the lantern glow, centuries of control slipped, and for a heartbeat she was only flesh and bone, haunted and raw.

The night held its breath again. The vineyard lay still beneath a sky of cold stars.

I blinked, voice small in the hush: “Did they—did any of them survive? What happened after?”